Comments on D. Robert Pease - Thoughts on Writing and Publishing a Fantasy Novel: Writing a Hook that Hooks

Congrats on the feedback! That's awesome. I did th...

2008-01-10T11:09:00.000-05:00

Congrats on the feedback! That's awesome. I did that on Rachel Vater site last year and got some great feedback too. Unlike you, I'm further away from having it ready to send...

Hopefully, we can get your manuscript run through the crit group faster. :) Speking of which, where's your next chapter?

I loved your pitch on Bookends. I don't read alot ...

2008-01-09T20:32:00.000-05:00

I loved your pitch on Bookends. I don't read alot of fantasy books but your's would definately make my list. I think I love your main character already. You gave just enough backstory and then reeled me in with the fact he doesn't remember his name and those voices inside his head.
Nice job! Now go finish so we can read it!

Great job on the pitch! I read it on BookEnds and...

2008-01-09T17:02:00.000-05:00

Great job on the pitch! I read it on BookEnds and found my way over. I hope Jessica's words do give you that final push you need. Such great things to look forward to.

Thanks S.M.D. I'd love to read it now too. :-) If ...

2008-01-09T11:29:00.000-05:00

Thanks S.M.D. I'd love to read it now too. :-) If only I was finished. Getting closer, but not quite there yet.

Just thought I'd say something about the pitch.If ...

2008-01-09T11:24:00.000-05:00

Just thought I'd say something about the pitch.
If you put a decent cover on it and I picked it up in a store and read that, I'd be sold instantly. That sounds like a really awesome premise and I really want to read it now...